儿童诗歌|Today I Wrote this Poem

Today I wrote this poem,but I'm not sure if it's good.It doesn't have the thingsmy teacher says a poem should.It doesn't share the feelingsI have deep inside of me.It hasn't any metaphors^{1and not one simile2.It's missing any narrative3.Alliteration4 too.It isn't an acrostic,diamante, or haiku.There's nothing that's personified.It doesn't have a plot.I'm pretty sure that rhymingis the only thing it's got.It sure was fun to write it,and I think it's long enough.It's just too bad it's missingall that great poetic5 stuff.I put it on my teacher's deskand, wow, she made a fuss.She handed back my poemwith an A++++!}